Winter jaunt

Hi, it's me again. During a boring day I have been writing this work of art. It is from my darker pocket, as you will see. PLZ, i would really appreciate your comments on this one, because it's the third poem i have ever written (and second published).

Winter jaunt

When I look out of the window, it's snowing
and the crows flying above croak
A strange meeting i have aranged today
with a mixed feeling
My companion is the dreadful bloke
and he is taking me away

The place he has chosen
is the deepest point in hell
There I stood frozen
as he spoke about
what can happen to an infidel

Nightmares rise from behind the hills
they flood the hopeless cities
Rivers of people flow like Amazon
to the island called Avalon
Now they behave like little kitties
and the devil shrills

Nor then i realized that
it is not a dream
but he was a diplomat
so he let me myself redeem.

Just tell me if you liked it. Don't worry I can stand critics =;-D.

The Weekend

Oh, yes. The long awaited weekend is here! I tell you, that i have been waiting for this since last Sunday. X-D. Ok, but what I really wanted to tell you is that: ' Good luck, in your state examination!' I am sorry that I cannot accompany you in this exam, 'coz I will have it next year in British council. Don't worry, the state exam won't be as difficult as the teachers promise. You have my guarantee that you will pass without any problems! See you later. Shalom.

Ahh, It's 5:21PM, and i have to learn for the school. But, what maybe isn't right, i don't want to. Tommorrow, we have a test from Geography, or Ecology, or how is it called. As a matter of fact, the curriculum is just dull, boring shit. You try to read, but then after a few sentences you realize, that you haven't learnt anything. Impossible. So whatever. I am not going to learn anything for tommorrow.

Rain

Here comes the rain again
like a storm
here comes the rain again
in an unseen form

It's falling down
'til the break of dawn
it keeps falling down
melting down the snow

Finally, november came
and there's a feeling I can't tame
so I have to surrender
to the rain.

Oh well, hi there. At last i have decided to create a blog of my own. But what is worst, i don't have any idea about what should it be. But that doesn't matter. It won't have any fixed schedule when I should update this. So just be patient, updates will come out. And i would really appreciate your ideas what to post, and be happy to receive any comment by you. :-D